tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6378450001604002654.post2425673148611074326..comments2024-03-16T21:01:53.378-04:00Comments on House Unseen. Life Unscripted.: A mother's Pentecost sonnetDwija {House Unseen}http://www.blogger.com/profile/17887429052179249473noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6378450001604002654.post-78805480317851019602011-06-20T10:20:15.085-04:002011-06-20T10:20:15.085-04:00Beautiful, Dwija. Thank you!Beautiful, Dwija. Thank you!Mitzihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13058758507978295767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6378450001604002654.post-77465439962753134512011-06-13T12:10:13.014-04:002011-06-13T12:10:13.014-04:00Little yellow tongues of flame. I get it. Love i...Little yellow tongues of flame. I get it. Love it! :Dhmmmmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00392788527804780788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6378450001604002654.post-53075484865323907192011-06-13T05:04:47.071-04:002011-06-13T05:04:47.071-04:00This piece was an unexpected direction from the pr...This piece was an unexpected direction from the prompt - but I'm glad you took the leap. Beautiful. Humble. Honest. I loved it!Samantha Sottohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14116257082088369600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6378450001604002654.post-30304321856013051662011-06-12T20:01:58.906-04:002011-06-12T20:01:58.906-04:00Gorgeous, gorgeous prose. The Lord rejoices in her...Gorgeous, gorgeous prose. The Lord rejoices in her meager life!! And her humility towards Him in that last line. This piece deserves a place on His mantle, Dwija. Every line of it is perfection. I am sure He is smiling down on you, so proud of who you are and what you share. You are a beautiful daughter of God. Tears!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17065921843809619618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6378450001604002654.post-4379569243903393482011-06-12T17:14:38.180-04:002011-06-12T17:14:38.180-04:00WOW!!!!WOW!!!!Allisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16021781602272064901noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6378450001604002654.post-88481241997406815222011-06-12T16:30:53.326-04:002011-06-12T16:30:53.326-04:00That was beautiful! (stopping by from FTLOB!)That was beautiful! (stopping by from FTLOB!)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6378450001604002654.post-962313755216248852011-06-12T15:06:05.007-04:002011-06-12T15:06:05.007-04:00One word,Dweej...perfect. :)One word,Dweej...perfect. :)Jenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17940118384108153753noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6378450001604002654.post-15294809273852390472011-06-12T09:51:28.995-04:002011-06-12T09:51:28.995-04:00Thank you all for your love and support. It means...Thank you all for your love and support. It means so much to me, especially on a post like this...a little raw :)Dwija {House Unseen}https://www.blogger.com/profile/17887429052179249473noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6378450001604002654.post-31768467002148078622011-06-12T09:36:01.645-04:002011-06-12T09:36:01.645-04:00You know what I like best about this? The pace. It...You know what I like best about this? The pace. It's so different from Normal Dweej. Usually I read your posts fast and furious, just trying to keep up! But this sonnet has a nice and slow rhythm, each word is important and meaningful.<br /><br />Love this especially:<br />That strength, that drive, through happiness and strife<br />That rush, that Spirit, is alive and well<br />The Lord rejoices in her meager life<br />And every joy around her seems to swellNinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17486088267364693085noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6378450001604002654.post-49234140752382059792011-06-12T09:31:03.737-04:002011-06-12T09:31:03.737-04:00This is absolutely beautiful. Really. God's gi...This is absolutely beautiful. Really. God's given a gift for writing & I thank you for sharing it with us. I printed this...Glennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06334203937303147489noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6378450001604002654.post-57900249692679184822011-06-12T09:18:42.976-04:002011-06-12T09:18:42.976-04:00Love the imagery of the "hidden flame," ...Love the imagery of the "hidden flame," how most are green but your's is red. Just a fascinating image and beautifully written line. <br /><br />The entire poem is gorgeous, not a word out of place...the feeling behind it apparent and real. Wonderful job, Dweej!Katie @ Chicken Noodle Gravyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02852793993330125727noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6378450001604002654.post-77437685994143934622011-06-12T09:08:51.347-04:002011-06-12T09:08:51.347-04:00What Ellen said was lovely, but hey, Ellen! Don...What Ellen said was lovely, but hey, Ellen! Don't see yourself short!<br /><br />Okay, now back to Dweej. Is it normal to sigh that many times while reading a sonnet? Happy, peaceful and content sighs of satisfaction and understanding? You always take these prompts in the most fantastic directions. Love. Happy Sunday.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6378450001604002654.post-78133436582067632552011-06-12T08:44:22.356-04:002011-06-12T08:44:22.356-04:00Two of the reasons I wanted to blog were to write ...Two of the reasons I wanted to blog were to write and to write about God. I find, after a few years of blogging, I don't do much real writing, and I don't write nearly enough about God.<br /><br />Why? Because there are so many better writers out there.<br /><br />Like you.<br /><br />I am daunted. While my "talent" seems real in my little world, in the blogosphere it is overwhelmed by lyrical words that are artfully arranged to hit the right notes.<br /><br />Like yours.<br /><br />So instead of a blog "writer," I can only claim to be a blog reader.<br /><br />I'm thankful for yours!<br /><br />Beautiful.Ellen aka Elliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17892924619560880572noreply@blogger.com